That is sooo sad.. = (

That is defintly sad, Do you really do that?

Very deep write, deep with pain also. I relate to your line " in my heart I hold so much pain" "pain I can't use words 2 explain" I too have pain I can't describe with words. 5/5 best wishes

Haii i realli enjoyd ur poem nd it gave a great nd different way of explaining it keep up tha great work...:P

It was sad, but i don't think it flowed very smoothly what with all the 1s and 2s and misspellings, it would have been a much better read without them.
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On the emotion side, this was a great poem.

But in another sense, try to refrain from using improper grammer such as the "some1" and the 2's. It really distracts the reader from the true essence of the poem and directs their attention more to the grammar mistakes than the content.

I ove this poem. thats exacutly wat i do. i have so many words and phrases up and down my arms my legs and my tummy. and its true, word cant explain the pain that we feel. and i personal thinik that it was a gret poem and you didnt need to fix anything up. it is perfect the way it is. please comment on all of my poems and tell me what you think of them
much love
xoxo ibleedregret

I love this poem!!..this is soo great!!...can you comment some of my other newer poems?! thanks!!! 5/5 from me!

About this poem... I thought the flow was off but I don't know that's just my opinion I thought the message being brought across while reading was good

You need to edit this. take out the 2 and stuff. change them to to or too. and the title. ur should be your.

don't cut corners to make the lines the right length. big no no.

5/5 anyway. still loved it. David

Wow.....i sorta got drawed in this poem...interesting title..but this poem is very good once again.. 5/5

This one held my intrest all the way though it. I loved the feeling that you expressed in this. I can relate. You did an awesome job. 5/5

I love your poem. is great!