Are Promise

by Treal   Mar 14, 2007


A promise to always try a promise to never hurt you a promise to love always a promise to never break promises like cira i promise you now you have my heart so like sira promise me to never lat me go

because like ne-yo i don't think i want too lat go now my baby got my heart like my ex did and the love of my life did and will always be my baby see i once was lost felt like a kid in this world along and so lonely

all by myself for many girls just a little to late like F... you don't want you back feel so low things in the past made me so sick but you not that kinda girl my sexy love will always hold you down because you make me so weak than we mesmerize

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  • 17 years ago

    by Andrew

    Good job man this one is good, thanks for oyur support too by the way.

  • 17 years ago

    by Treal

    Yea

  • 17 years ago

    by Katie

    Is this one long enough for you??

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=859736

    You might want to try using grammar in your poems. Maybe some line structure, punctuation, stuff like that. It would probably make them more effective.

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