Never should've happened

I like this poem, a lot... but there's nothing that really stood out to me... i mean like, there's were some parts where the flow was a little messed up, and some of the rhymes seemed a little forced. but i like it because i can relate to what you're saying, i know what you're going through in this... good job!

I feel the same way.... man once again i can relate. i love them. they flow perfectly and its once again emotionally strong.

Now my darling, I realize you're younger than me, so I will sympathize with your lack of writing experience.

I understand the poem's message. Really I do. I don't get your title to poem connection. But that is your decision.

Your rhymes seem quite forced. You lack vocabulary.

But don't worry, the poems I wrote when I was your age were about the same skill level. Keep working towards better poetry!

So simple wording but to the point
Keep on writing
Have a nice day
Laura

I loved this poem, it was absolutley beautiful! the flow was amazing and the wording was just perfect! there was soo much emotion in this poem, which makes it even better! 5-5