Aw. this poem really touhed me. the paqin its just ..the guy is cruel.

Something I should
Have never felt,
Now I have to deal with
all these things not dealt.

i think you should get rid of the repition of the word dealt. nice poem. 5/5.

Well, it was a good poem! I liked it! I'll give it a 5

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This was a very good poem, men are such jackasses, but it really does hurt when one slaps you on the cheek....anyway this was a wonderful poem, very well written, great job 5/5

Oh the ending paragraph was so dramatic. so much love in this poem too. yet so much sadness cause he didn't say yes or is playing you along.

but again another great write! 5/5 David

I loved this poem, it was absolutley beautiful! the flow was amazing and the wording was just perfect! there was soo much emotion in this poem, which makes it even better! 5-5

So simple wording but to the point
Keep on writing
Have a nice day
Laura

Now my darling, I realize you're younger than me, so I will sympathize with your lack of writing experience.

I understand the poem's message. Really I do. I don't get your title to poem connection. But that is your decision.

Your rhymes seem quite forced. You lack vocabulary.

But don't worry, the poems I wrote when I was your age were about the same skill level. Keep working towards better poetry!

I feel the same way.... man once again i can relate. i love them. they flow perfectly and its once again emotionally strong.

I like this poem, a lot... but there's nothing that really stood out to me... i mean like, there's were some parts where the flow was a little messed up, and some of the rhymes seemed a little forced. but i like it because i can relate to what you're saying, i know what you're going through in this... good job!