Comments : Friendly-Enemy

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle

    I really liked it. I like how you wrote about change and how something as simple as time can drastically create or destroy something; like a friend turned enemy.

    I liked the lines,
    "It unites us in our past,
    Forgotten secrets lost.
    But time pulls us apart.
    The change of heart"

    I think those lines really got to the true subject of the poem and portrayed it nicely.

    you did though have a couple spelling errors though such as, "innosence" in line 8.

    Overally I liked it and thought you did a good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by azii

    I really liked this one. I think this is my favorite.. The meaning and whole thing is perfect. You did a awesome job :)
    It's true.. Everything can happen so fastly and everything is different in a snap.. I really understand what you mean.. All I can say is this is my favorite poem of all those I ever read :) I hope I could give it 10/5 lol...

    Best of wishes
    Take care

  • 17 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Just totally loved it.