Beautifully written, one of your better writes from what I have seen so far. The last line is too long, and the conclusion of a poem is important, but other than that, nicely done.

Oh my god this poem is sooooo great i love it!!! !!! !!! !!!

I like your message, we have given a lot for our freedom and its important never to take for granted that freedom. Well writen and a message that rings clear and true.

This is very well written. I love the emotion in it. Keep going! Let me know when you have done some more!

OMG, i loved it!!!!! It's prolly one ov my favorites...:):) and the last stanza was my fav!!! really good..:):)

Yeah, probably one of my favorite poems by you. loved it. Good job.

This i love its one of my favs by you great job idk why i just love this one its jus all around a 5/5

laura

This is an incredible poem, if I were you, I'd go with this one for your contest =)

Holy crap.
Youre getting better and better,
which i never thought was possible.
You should seriously enter some contests or something!