Lost

by x Mo x   Mar 15, 2007


I feel lost in the sea
Of names and faces.
My thoughts are gone
Without any traces.

I can't feel the warmth
From the smiles of friends.
The feelings and hopes
Now all twist and bend.

Lost smiles, lost joys,
Lost hopes, lost dreams;
New found fears and doubts.
All words are empty it seems.

~Originally written 1-25-2007~

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  • 16 years ago

    by Austin

    Interesting Mo. Actually, I thought i was kinda sad by the end of it. The character feeling lost, makes me want to help. Written very well, keep up the nice work. This was very nice.

  • 17 years ago

    by Yvonne

    You are really good! Keep it up! Oh and look> :) There see I am smiling at you!

  • 17 years ago

    by unique

    Nice poem!
    I liked it
    Check out my poems plz and tell me what u think..Idk if my poems are good or not cuz no one has left a comment yet

  • 17 years ago

    by Vodka

    Wow, thats AMAZING!!!! can I just say that I could NEVER write a poem HALF as good! (and o my goodness, peole are swearing. so alone......so alone......) u rock!

    <3/sahara

  • 17 years ago

    by silvershoes

    I notice you go sort of half-ass in grammar. You should go full out correct, or forget about it all-together. Some interesting, unique ideas mixed in with run-of-the line. I like these phrases: Lost in the sea, of names in faces (however, you should consider "a sea," instead of "the sea), twist and bend, lost smiles, new found fears and doubts.

    A moderately strong poem. Good work.

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