Sam
This is really good. I love the word choices.

Light your way,
Through my cold soul,
Enlist in my contoured romance,
Make my broken body whole,

This was my favorite part :)
Take Care Love Cindy

I am a songwriter as well, and I could hear the music in your words... the whisper inbetween. Great job!! ^_^

Your precious smile,
Taking over me,
You're my ever-lasting desire,
My burning passion,
My only fire,

Light your way,
Through my cold soul,
Enlist in my contoured romance,
Make my broken body whole

this is just so beautiful indeed...loved it completely

all the best and take care