Hey that works. i like it. the description you used for so little words was well executed.

5/5 David

I love the message in this. It pops out at you even though there aren't many words. But I guess that's the beauty of a haiku.
The way I learned haikus in grammar school is that it didn't have to be only about nature, it could be anything.
Amazing work. Keep it up. :]

Beautiful nature poem! Of course I loved it! Lol. I really don't know what to do if you ever left this site! You're an unbeleivable writer! God bless
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Well done. i need to learn how to write one of these. i bet they are hard tho. well i loved it. short yet sweet. just how i like poem. straight to the point.

5/5 David

I really like Haiku, but I never could write it! Really good job on this one! I'm so proud of you :)

going to read another..

Your depth in this poem brings haikus to a new level. beautful wording. 5/5.

I absolutely adore Haikus, and yours was no exception; it was beautiful. I love how such a clear picture can be fully described in such a short amount of words.

Wonderful.

Very unique. Great job on this form!

Ooooo...short simple..full of meaning like it... =)

Once again, you portray nature in a way by comparing to humans as well. Nice job

Wow.
Loved this poem, a lot.

"Scarlet petals confirm pain"
^ That was my favorite line.
I loved it.
The image I get from it is so quite amazing.

Great poem.
Keep it up.

I LOVE this. Takes something so beautiful and precious and brightens its flaws, great job.

5.5
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