This was so beautiful, your poems have so much colour, and are so relaxing to read, cause you can see and feel them.
5/5
gabriella

That was great david i musch prefer reading happy poems from you then the sad ones. Keep up the good work

Andrew

Wow.. that was awesome, the imagery was amazing! The flow was wonderful, and it was all over an awesome poem. Now, I'm not normally one for nature poems, but I enjoyed this one, so you did something right!! lol, great job as always David 5/5
Much Love,
.:Danielle:.