Comments : Perfect Bliss

  • 17 years ago

    by Laura

    Beautifully penned heartfelt piece!
    the flow was great and i can relate to your bliss...the whole write was captivating but the ending lines really sealed the deal!

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    Do you even have the smallest clue
    How your smile makes my heart beat fast
    Praying that we'll always be together
    That this perfect bliss will last.

    You sound like a romantic. A lot like me in some ways. Great poem