by I Seem to be the Heartless Mar 15, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
The band walked onto the stage |
by silvershoes
Oh yeah, you should send these poems to the band! |
by silvershoes
Haha, very cute. The rhyme schemes are very simple, but maybe this was your intent. You should try broadening your vocabulary a bit, it may add a little extra spice to your poetry. However, I have only read your two most recent poems to go by, so perhaps I'm wrong to judge. |