Broken Without You

by katie   Mar 15, 2007


My love,
I don't think you'll ever realize
That looking in your eyes
Gave me the strength to carry on,
To be strong,
To move on,
To hold on.
Each and every day
I'd pray that you would find what you're looking for in life.
Each and every day
I'd go out of my way
To make sure you were happy.
I love you,
I need you,
I miss you.
My love,
I wish that you could see
What your words have done to me,
The anger that lingers inside
Blended with my sadness
Has left me with a feeling
I have never felt before.
I'd cry for you,
I'd die for you,
Bleed dry for you,
But I could never say bye to you.
Can't you see
That when you walked away
My world collapsed
One day seemed like three years elapsed.
After all the "You're my best friend's"
After all the "I love you's"
I'm starting to wonder
If anything you said to me was true.
I'll always love you,
I'll always need you,
I'll always miss you.
I'm broken without you.

~~~To Joey, who I'll love always, even if he can never love me back. Take care my love, I hope one day you'll realize how much you truly mean to me :'( ~~~

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  • 17 years ago

    by splitlevel420

    This is good the same thing had happened to me before : (

    <33 kriss

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle

    I really liked it. I admit that the beginning was a bit weak, but overall I enjoyed the read. I like how you portrayed the feeling of unconidtional love; even though you've been abandoned (perhaps?) and this person doesn't return your feelings, you still love and care for them. I think you described that beautifully and poetically, and I liked your rythm and format. A couple of my favorite lines were,
    "I wish that you could see
    What your words have done to me,"

    "I'd cry for you,
    I'd die for you,
    Bleed dry for you"

    suggestion though. In "I could never say bye to you" I think that "bye" should be substituted with "GOODbye" because the shortened version doesn't seem as impactful and messes with the rythm a bit.

    Overall good job

  • 17 years ago

    by Heidi Harover

    I like the way u use your words in the poem, i can understand it

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