The flow of this poem was flawless and you have so many wonderful lines in it.

"John Doe was not all that lay there fighting for his breath
A dying justice system will surely be our death "

Although this wasn't the ending I expected for this particular write, It does, pretty much sum up the poem.

You did an exceptional job on this. The story was quite captivating in that it kept the reader focused.

Great job.

Always,
Jeannie

Excellent poem. sad but i am afraid to it rings true