This poems really sweet i liked the emotion running through it. I think it was beautifully sad but with a touch of sweetness through it. Well done ~mel

This is fantastic great job and thx for the comment:D

keenan

Wow this one very amazing!!! nice words very romantic.

I thought it was a great poem full of emotion. It took the poem as some first loves are.. You fall in love with someone yet they don't seem to feel the same way.. I think everyone can relate to this.. 5/5
~Tyanna~

I really like your style of poetry. You do a great job to saying what you feel and making it sound simple. good job!

BTW I've been there and back an thousand times and I'm not even sure if I'm out of it right now but I feel for you.

Hehehe thanks for make me smile... the last lines really make me smile coz it was so sweet and ur really express ur love as a teenager and i was remember when i was at ur age.. well just keep on writing all what u feel little boy.. im enjoyed reading this one...

"Wondering why I exist in this world
Is it to seek happiness or glory?"
Beautiful lines...the poem is short but filled with emotions and last line is sweet!...the whole write is short and simple..well-said indeed!..kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

Hey great poem keep it up

Well I must be jaded, The work as a whole flowed and the message was clear sad but clear, and the images you portaid were fine all and all a good poem. Plot121

Very touching, keep up the good work!
god bless!