I thought oww, a new poem from u. I'll chack it out! ANd i did i it's great! 4/5

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You entered this in my contest i loved it nice job!!

Well I was surprised with how simple this poem is, but so powerful. A lot of girls these days can't feel comfortable being who they are. So they turn to the next option, which would be to be like everyone else.

This poem sort of reminded me of Pink. XD Because Pink is all about being yourself and not letting people change you or your heart. And you portrayed your emotions very well in this poem.

[I won't try to make you sweat or act like stupid]
^^ I didn't quite understand the part where it says 'act like stupid.' I just didn't think it went well. Is stupid supposed to be a person? Because if it is, then 'stupid' should be spelled with a capital so people know. Just a suggestion. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Very nice. I enjoyed it a lot. 4/5

Btw.. Thanks for the comments

Very nicely written. I loved the message in this.. it's so very powerful. The wording is so simple & everything just flowed well.

Beautiful.

Bri [x]

I enjoyed this poem
U have a unique way of wording things.

Amazing...loved the topic.....a definite 5/5 from me
jus wanna say...whitey white chicks are the BEST!!! AAAAAH!!
sorry..random moment...
btw..thanks for the comment...i took ur advice and edited it :) thanks again