Cute! I loved it, 5/5

Oh my this poem is sooo good and sad tho at the same time great job 5/5!! And are you really dating him now sooo happy for ya!! comment back..
((Kelsey))

Wonderfull poem.. i reallly like it... i like the ryme to it lol

Sarraa u are so in love with him.. its like he is your precious baby... lol ya but sounds like you really like him.. o ya by the way i like someone else now and he is so sweet and cute lol and guess wut my crush called me today 2 times but guess what i wasnt there caz i was taking a shower but my brother picked up.. man i missed it lol but i will see him tomorrow.. lol and i gotta go so comment bac and i will get bac to you!!!

Aww thats nice of your brother..
Yeah u no how me and him are 2 years apart his a jr and im a freshman? Yeah you wont believe the shit im gettni from the older girls im like seriously about to fcking flip on the next bctch to say anything to me.
I dont understand why people try to get in the middle of other peoples life.
I dont think ive been so annoyed before.

My heart broke for you when I read this. Its beautiful words to describe beautiful memories that you will carry with you always. The best loves are the ones that never die and yours will last you a lifetime even if only lived in your memories. Thanks for sharing precious moments with your reader, reminds ppl to appreciate their own loves.

Sammib

Ya you are right maybe i should carry the phone with me wen i am showering!!! lol but ya well today he was like kinda flirting wit me and i was sooooooooooooooooooo happy lol ya and he called me today and he asked if i wanted to go to his house but it was frezzing cold outside and besides i made plans wit my family.. lol i hope he understood me.... haha his name is vinny.. he is amazing lol anywayz how was your dAY???

Hi thanx girl.. yup i am 17 and i am lovin it lol well i have 2 projects doe to on monday;. anywayz wut kinda projects do u have to do??

Awww, thats so sweet, but its so sad! beautifully written! really good!

xxxo

This is so nice and sad too. u did a really good job on this poem, keep it up 5/5 =)

Omg...that is so sad! i love it! thanks for all the comments. you are very talented!

oh yeah...to answer your question earlier. my bf's name is will and i promise i wasn't stalking you...hehe! or was i? nah..jk!

xoxo becca!

Aww! i luv this poem! its soo suh weet! thts kind of how my luv life is but my bf didnt move away! but i really luv it!

Gosh...i wanna drive! lol. my parents are still getting to know him...but oh well! i get to see him tomorrow YAY!!!!

xoxo kisses

Ya i know i am gonna ask him on monday if he wants to hang out!! so how is your day with shane goin?????
lol haha man all we talk about is boys and its pretty fun lol hahahaha

I know i still have to do one of my projects cuz my teacher gave me a month to do it but i dint start it lol anywayz i am gonna finish it today so i could hand it in tomorrow... so u hangin out wit shane today???lol hahah

Very well written. i liked it mucho. haha its so sad that your love had to move. but maybe it was for the best you know? anyways i loved it and a 5/5 from me!<3

Awww congradulations!!!!!!!!!
Saturday was amazing i had fun.
Yeah im trying to ignore them he told me to ignore them to and that ishould trust him and no him that he didnt say shit like waht they said he did. and yeah i think he got offended and is mad at me for asking if he said that stuff that the girls told me he did but i had to make sure u no?

That made me cry!! it touches the heart!! i hope you can see or talk to him again some day! fate and god has their ways of you two be together again and maybe forever!!

Awww, thanks for the omments i havent signed on very often so i just got it, you really think i am a good writer? im just 14 so maybe it will improve mor later on, thanls agaim

Ha yea i live in SC just like xoxokissesxoxo ...i dont know if she wants me to say her name or not! but yea so how r u and shane?