Sanctuary of Hell... [New]

Let The Spirits From The Shadows
Come Forth to Thee
May The Ashes Of Mortals rain upon me!
Let Satan Rise Among Us
As he banishes the history of Exodus
& Let The Suffering Of Mortals reign Forever!
Your sorrow's the one that pulled the lever
An End To Their Life Shall Come...
Great Satan's Deed shall be done
Now Down With Us They Go...
The Pit Of Darkness...
Realm Of The Unknown!
As Fire licks their toes
And serpents wrap around them
like poor garden gnomes
Dehydrated, they are, but
filled with fear
And End to their suffering
is far from near
Screaming and moaning in pain
Freedom, is something they'll never win
Something they'll never gain
Walking through the forest of Suicide
Then comes the desert
where everything subsides...
I walk through this infernal city
Taking joy as they scream and moan
I walk into the throne room... All alone
Breaking of my feathery wings at the pit of my spine
breaking my halo, Damning the great divine
Thanks to Him... I am no longer alive...

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I wasn't happy with the first version... i didn't like that one but please tell me how this one worked out