I really liked this one! its really good. so keep it up.

Goodjob

WOW,your darker work is back. . .i have to say once you get going on a poem like this it only seems to get better and better. . .you've got quiet the talent there (i know i say that all the time)but it really is true. . .you'd be suprized at how much your words touch others. . .keep it up. . .i wish i could give you way more then a little 5/5
auna