This is a great poem,, it is rele good,, this may or may not be the best u've written,, but this is nice. it doesnt matter wat other people think,, just matters about wat you think. i believe though that you have a lot of talent,, and u should show ur work to a professional,, u could go far,, keep up the good work,, i look forward to reading more poems from u,, keep it up,, ur friend always,
Janaynay p.s. 5/5

Aww this is really cute write! It doesn't matter what love is it matters to able to share your life with loved ones, like so true. Sweet poem. Really enjoy it.
Amazing work:)
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