Woah! Nice poem! It's like a sweet tragedy written with tormenting emotions.. I really like it! :)

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Very tragic. An unfortunate end to the most selfless love. It has some of the most beautiful lines. Well done. A 5.

Hey,

That was really nice, different .. rarely see someone attempt to write using that form of language! Well, at least I haven't come across it .. : )

It was honest! Keep it up!