For The Sake Of Our Friendship

Your very good. i love it. keep it up.. i like reading your work..

Wonderful poem.
Very well written.
5/5
take care.

~Chelsea

The person who cried for my each pain.
^I think it should be "every".. "each" doesn't really make sense.

Now you left me alone,
^ You need to add "have" after "left"

So I could tell you
^ I think you got the tenses mixed up try putting in "can" instead.

This was a heartfelt poem but I got so distracted by the flow. I am sorry Goran but every poem of yours I read I feel the flow really detracts from it. Your lines are such different sizes and they just don't seem to go well together. This, however, is just my opinion. Nice job 4/5

Cute poem. the only thing i didn't like, and ill say it flat out. the audience you described in the poem sounds like someone that YOU DID HURT, and is mad at you. so saying if ever i hurt you. it just doesnt sound right.

best of wishes.

Hey
yayaya
my comment is for three persons here
desi, the pale queen, and the girl called crul by desi and pale queen.
the poem is nice and emotional and all that because goran knows how to write his feelings on a piece of paper.however, I think desi and the pale queen have crossed the line of poetic language dealing with the girl called crul and crazy by them.
I don't know the pale queen but desi is my good friend, but i dont know none of the persons who goran wrote the poem about, but dont you guys think you guys are mistakly judgeing a person who you guys dont know. she might have reasons of not liking goran. I know and this is not an opinion but a fact that goran is one of the best guy and a true friend in this world, not just with me but you guys may know this too.yet goran have to get out of this dark world, stop hurting yourself and that so called crul girl, because she will get hurt reading comments like the one from desi and the queen,
you guys are telling goran that he will lose your friendship, wow.......what a nice friendship, ok turn around and leave him, because he is not laughing like other friends, leave him and come back be his friend again when he solve his problams. but im proving to be the real friend, i will stay with his tears, i will promise to bring back that friend to him just only if he trust me and ask for my help, i promise to go knock that crul girls door and try to get reason from her without calling her crul and crazy without knowing who she is.