For the sake of our friendship, a brilliant title and a poem full of emotions. i hope everything work out.

It's worrying and so touching i liked especially those

rude girl,
Took over my happiness
Now it is just me
And my pen.
Not even my best friend
The angel,
Who use to cry for each of my pain.

And if those are true,i hope everything works out and i hope that girl would have her heart broken....[: just smile
With all my wishes
Have a nice day
LAURA

Good write... Enjoyed reading this... well done!

Goran.....hope things are better....the poem is very heartwrenching....

The time
A glass breaks,
I always pick up its pieces
So it doesn't hurt anyone.
But today
When my heart broke
You are not here
To see how I am feeling.

These lines are just so sad...
Hope things are mended.....take care, Debbie

I love the layout of this poem. You have a very unique style and this poem really does capture a great emotion.

"Rude girl,
Took over my happiness
Now it is just me
And my pen.
Not even my best friend
The angel,
Who use to cry for each of my pain."

My favorite bit. This totally deserves 5/5. <3

Exellent. I love it.

Beauuuutiful again :D i love reading your poems, i look at my favorites at your name to see if you've written any new poems anytime i come on here, they're so beautiful! thanks for the comments on mine, i wrote a new one if you wanna see, it was pretty good. another great poem to the greatest poet on this site 5/5

Goran, this poem could make anyone cry. your words are heartfelt and full of so much emotion. its like i can feel what you're feeling. and maybe I can...cos I've gone through similiar things. this was an amazing write. i hope things do get better between you two. take care.

` Liz

Sorry it took so long to comment on this, i will say alot about this poem, cause i can feel a guilt of yours in it. personaly i have told you many times she dont deserve you. not your that angel friend, i mean the crul girl who you have an image in your poetry.

goran, you mean alot to me that is why im telling you this, you are more valueable person than a girl you dont know the value of a guy who is a hero to many of us.
tonight, i am not taking your side, im taking your angel friend s side as one day surly you will lose us for that selfish girl.
Goran if this poems are true then you are hurting yourself, like of of your poems says "you are locking yourself in a memory" of someone who is no one, she is nothing.
goran i hope this comment opened your eyes and you can find out who truly care about a person call GORAN. you are much more important for us, we need you more than a crul,crazy, heart-heart person who is blind by the joy of the days.
at last, i am asking that angel friend to forgive you, im telling her (goran need you as i can tell you are so important to him) and im sure by now you know that goran has the most beautiful heart in this world, who cannot betray a person ever.

Hello
i tried not to comment on any poem, but you are different, because u are my little fairy so i shall both vote and share my thought with you on this piece of magnificent work.
without question, you know that i love your poem, and this poem ment allot. who am i kidding, you know my weakness goran. lool
i totally agree with desigirl, for i believe she knows you in person, which i am envious of but you and i know that we know each other better than anyone else. this poem brought tears to my eye and if i were any where close to t hat girl, i would make her life hell for she deserves nothing of your kind, you are to great to kind for her crul and proud personality, she is nobody and with time she will come to know that. her kind of love is nothing but temptition and desire, which is nothing of love. she is the object and toy of time and pleasure but has no tie to reality what so ever. i truly feel bad for her, and if she ever comes across this comments then she will know what she is.....
i don't really want to be rude and unfair in my judgment for i don't know in person and she may have good reason for what she is doing but i can not find any reason for why she did that to u.
beside i trust u have forgotten her by now because u have to much in life to waste it on some useless memorry.
take care my fairy

Quite interesting, from the style that was used to the offbeat pacing. The way you used your words was great, and emotion (although it felt mixed) was certainly there. Overall, great job. Quite an interesting piece I must say. ^_^x

Very nicely written Goran, Full of emotion that came right from your heart. The flow as well as the structure was outstanding. Good Luck to you and your Friend.

Peace, Joe

Thats wonderful poem, im sure your friend must be proud of you for such true expression.

Lovely poem. Full of emotion. The flow was excellent.
Good job 5/5

:Sarah:

Hey
yayaya
my comment is for three persons here
desi, the pale queen, and the girl called crul by desi and pale queen.
the poem is nice and emotional and all that because goran knows how to write his feelings on a piece of paper.however, I think desi and the pale queen have crossed the line of poetic language dealing with the girl called crul and crazy by them.
I don't know the pale queen but desi is my good friend, but i dont know none of the persons who goran wrote the poem about, but dont you guys think you guys are mistakly judgeing a person who you guys dont know. she might have reasons of not liking goran. I know and this is not an opinion but a fact that goran is one of the best guy and a true friend in this world, not just with me but you guys may know this too.yet goran have to get out of this dark world, stop hurting yourself and that so called crul girl, because she will get hurt reading comments like the one from desi and the queen,
you guys are telling goran that he will lose your friendship, wow.......what a nice friendship, ok turn around and leave him, because he is not laughing like other friends, leave him and come back be his friend again when he solve his problams. but im proving to be the real friend, i will stay with his tears, i will promise to bring back that friend to him just only if he trust me and ask for my help, i promise to go knock that crul girls door and try to get reason from her without calling her crul and crazy without knowing who she is.

Cute poem. the only thing i didn't like, and ill say it flat out. the audience you described in the poem sounds like someone that YOU DID HURT, and is mad at you. so saying if ever i hurt you. it just doesnt sound right.

best of wishes.

The person who cried for my each pain.
^I think it should be "every".. "each" doesn't really make sense.

Now you left me alone,
^ You need to add "have" after "left"

So I could tell you
^ I think you got the tenses mixed up try putting in "can" instead.

This was a heartfelt poem but I got so distracted by the flow. I am sorry Goran but every poem of yours I read I feel the flow really detracts from it. Your lines are such different sizes and they just don't seem to go well together. This, however, is just my opinion. Nice job 4/5

Wonderful poem.
Very well written.
5/5
take care.

~Chelsea

Your very good. i love it. keep it up.. i like reading your work..