My Game

by Christie   Mar 16, 2007


In one look conveyed a world,
Previously unknown to me,
Tempted just to walk on by,
Let the situation be.

But within those eyes teased a smile,
One oh so sincere,
No troubles or problems just gorgeous eyes,
My wants are oh so clear.

Smile a smile that is so sweet,
One thats not condemned,
One he'll still be thinking of,
When he dissappears pas the bend.

Give a look that with no mistake,
Tells him he's all you'd like to earn,
Maybe tho in a couple of weeks,
For you'll have to wait your turn.

Keep thinking of him, how could you not?
And hope he's doing the same..
Sexy, yes, and he's just so nice,
But maybe its just a game.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle

    I really liked this poem. The beginning was very strong and I especially liked the lines,
    "But within those eyes teased a smile,
    One oh so sincere,"
    I love the way you worded that. Your lines are very poetic and beautiful, lyrical I think. I have to admite though that the second-to-last line didn't end well. It seemed too blunt, and wasn't very poetic to me.
    However, the poem itself was so lovely I still consider it an excellent read. Great job

  • 17 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    Great poem, flow and choice of words is awesome!! One thing, and I'm not sure if you meant it to be like this, but

    When he dissappears pas the bend.

    Shouldn't pas be past? lol, but other than that, awesome poem, I love the rhyming the rythmn 5/5
    Much Love,
    .:Danielle:.

  • 17 years ago

    by Boogie

    GREAT POEM! i really loved it !

    5/5 .. ure really talented ! ;)

    rate/comment me !

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