Its a good poem. But it makes me sad. I almost want to cry. Self harm is never the answer nor is there an answer to the pain. I hope in time your life gets better and the cuts become nothing more than scars. Ones that you can look at and know you have moved on. That you have found a better path. And your safe with who you are. |
by lizzy
Great job! i know where your coming form on this and it really described what i felt when i used to cut, im better now and i no longer do it, but i still rember that aweful feeling i would get! |
by Darren
Wow, what a great ending, fantastic pace, strong emotional poem. |
by Alanis
You have such a way with rhymes! Remarkable piece! 5/5 |