He Said; She Thought.

by BrixGoesxRawr   Mar 16, 2007


"I thought that you were over me"
Obviously not.

"Now, you have me so confused"
& you have me hypnotized.

"I did love you, but now I'm with someone"
She can't love you like I would.

"I don't know what to do, Hun"
Follow your heart, baby.

"I can't deal with all this, it's too much"
Let's drown in a pool of love together.

"At least now I know exactly how you feel"
I can't even explain how I feel.

"Are you sure that these feelings are real?"
Real.. & strong..

"I don't want to be just a game to you"
You're so much more than that..

"Why didn't you ever tell me?"
I was too scared.

"You made me feel like I never had a chance"
You were always the one.

"But now.. I'm in love with someone else"
Fall in love with me, baby..
Too little; too late..

[ UM. SO MUCH FUN TO WRITE. :] Kinda random.. but Idk. ]

Brianna Carter
March 16, 2007.

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  • 17 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Very unique, loved how you put it, good choice of words!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Aha, kind of random! More like, really random! See, that's why we're the freakiest! This was a really good poem Breezy, I think you should change the title to 'Too Little, Too Late', because it sounds so much cooler! Lol, but the title you have now is fine, it makes a lot more sense, but I liked that last line alot! Good job on this one hun!

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    Brisa! =] This reminded me of a conversation I had with someone a while ago. Kinda the exact same thing. Lol. That's just weird. Lol. Anyways, i really enjoyed reading this piece. It does seem kinda random, lol. But it's different and thats what makes it so good. Keep writing! 5/5

    Love you!!

    ` Glenduh!

  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    I suggest that your "&"s be "and"s because it kind of abruptly stops the flow when you make that symbol.

    Too little; too late.. (♥ JoJo)

    Really interesting right... and it IS kind of random...
    Good poem though... original idea and a very catchy title!

    ~Stephen White
    (*Happily*Never*After*)
    (yellowfeverlime)

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    This is beautiful... i love it! the flow is neat, the wording is perfect & i LOVE how it goes from what he said to what she thought

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