This was a unique write. I would offer suggestions.. but I'm not sure if it needs any or if it would be the same. Definitely not the standard type of poem seen on this site. All in all I enjoyed reading the parts of it.

This was very cute, i like the style you wrote it in
"I can't deal with all this, it's too much"
Let's drown in a pool of love together.

it just makes me smile reading it, ;p
luv gabriella

I liked it I just didnt understand it lol

Wow, this poem was quite different from most that i've read. 5/5 love

I am in love with this poem and the one like it. Both of them are so true and I can totally relate. You always write stuff that is so REAL. I love it.

Good job! =] <3

<3, Shades of Blue

This is beautiful... i love it! the flow is neat, the wording is perfect & i LOVE how it goes from what he said to what she thought

I suggest that your "&"s be "and"s because it kind of abruptly stops the flow when you make that symbol.

Too little; too late.. (♥ JoJo)

Really interesting right... and it IS kind of random...
Good poem though... original idea and a very catchy title!

~Stephen White
(*Happily*Never*After*)
(yellowfeverlime)

Brisa! =] This reminded me of a conversation I had with someone a while ago. Kinda the exact same thing. Lol. That's just weird. Lol. Anyways, i really enjoyed reading this piece. It does seem kinda random, lol. But it's different and thats what makes it so good. Keep writing! 5/5

Love you!!

` Glenduh!

Aha, kind of random! More like, really random! See, that's why we're the freakiest! This was a really good poem Breezy, I think you should change the title to 'Too Little, Too Late', because it sounds so much cooler! Lol, but the title you have now is fine, it makes a lot more sense, but I liked that last line alot! Good job on this one hun!

Very unique, loved how you put it, good choice of words!!