I love you<33

by StormyStar   Mar 16, 2007


Look inside of my eyes and tell me why,
why do you care for her so much,
stop your lies, and realize that I'm in love with you.
I'll be here for you always,
just don't ever leave my side.
i know that you care when I'm right there,
but once I'm gone, your love is done.
i wish you knew how much i loved you,
not like you'd care, for your loves not really there.
you say you love her but i can't see,
behind all the stupid lies,
the things she says to fill your head,
shows she's not true, so how can you possibly love you too?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I liked it, but am getting tired of the same stuff. I'd like to see more emotion in your work, i hope that you dont take my comments the wrong way, i just say what i feel most of the time.
    You do have talent, and with some work you could be a great writer.
    love Tara-Kay
    x

  • 17 years ago

    by azii

    Aww.. so sweet .. loved it
    Great job, once again
    Your a great poet

    5/5

    Keep up the wonderful job

  • 17 years ago

    by We Miss You Shannon

    This one is good to. i know how u feel cuz i have a freind that does the same thing. i just wish he could relize i love him. (dont b a stranger either)

    ~shanny~

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