by StormyStar Mar 16, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
When i look in the eyes of the love i find, |
by jLegendc
Damn.. u won't run oout of words.. nice!! |
Another lengthy one but good! 5/5 |
by Tara Kay
There are grammar mistakes and as good poets we should pay particular detail to the use of grammar and punctuation, but also as poets we should understand the content and emotions within ones work, and the fact that they can overflow the grammar mistakes. |
by nikki
The flow was a little off the structure was ok, but i rather didn't like this poem, but i have a few fave lines. |
by Robert
I know you wanted to say alot in this poem and by doing so I think you lost both the core message and path you wanted to take and the flow was off. I think if you had channel your thoughts and stayed with a certain formula of work this poem would show alot more of your true talents Plot121 |