This is a great poem 5/5 keep up the good work sweety

Great poem 5/5
Loved it
The rhymig was great as well
Keep on writing your wonderful poetry

Nice and a lovely write, you are a good writer, keep up the great job so i can return and read more of your grea work, you deserve a 5/5 tha is why you are getting a 5/5 from me. keep it up.

Very powerful emotions. Was this true?
One suggestion is to capitalize the beginning of each line.

Very good poem. Liked it a lot. 5/5

There was alot of grammar mistakes in this missing letters and other words that just didn't belong. This brokee up the flow real bad, I was reallt disappointed in this. I would under stand little minor mistakes but about 70% of this poem needed fixing sorry Plot121

I did find alot of grammar mistakes, and i think that should be changed to help with the flow, but being the person i am, i corrected the grammar as i read it, so it didnt change the way in which it was read.
I really thought it was good, i liked the wording and the style. a very sweet poem.
Love Tara-Kay
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