As I lay awake,
Blowing wind past my window,
Could it be the sound of your love?
Does this mean you want to talk?
Each day seems like an enterity,
From the first moment when we kissed, you were
Gone with my heart,
Has your mind been changed since that day?
I seem to think it has,
Just like the moment you walked out,
Keep telling myself you'll be back, just wait a night,
Lightly touching my pillow,
My heart sinks to the floor,
Nothing could be as bad as the pain,
Oh please just come back,
Please just take away this doubt,
Quietly crying myself to sleep,
Right now, you say it's for the best,
Still I can't see how,
To you it may be for the best, but for me there's nothing left,
Until I wake from this slumber, I give the devil what's left of my soul,
Violins are playing that horrible song, I hear it in my mind,
When the devil comes to collect my soul, may it be a quick death,
Xing through my heart, like how it already feels,
Zebra stripes, are like the pain that rips through me each day.
I really liked the beginning of this poem, but to be honest the end kind of lost its flow. Don't get me wrong it was great I just think the beginning started off a little different than what the end became. I still give a 5/5 though.
