I don't understand either... i guess i never will...
nice poem, though...
the repetition was nice, till the couple last stanzas...i think you ought to leave it one time than 3...it might just look a little better...
it's your choice, though
do what ye will...=))
but, well...
a poet should not be criticized...
for it's thy emotions that speak...
i think it's good to let your emotions flow...
it makes me feel better, do not know if you feel better, also...
and you end up with a nice poem...=)
5/5
keep going
*isabel*