This is perfectly written a great poem, you have showed a great talent which is unique. i really enjoyed reading it... keep up the great job and a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

The flow and the wording were good but there is just a thing,change 'must's to should and it would be perfect
Keep it up
Laura

This is REALLY good. [I love the title, btw]. It flowed really nicely & nothing really seemed forced.

On these journeys I can't comprhend [comprehend*]

About the one that can hurt you the mos [most*]

I'm sorry if I went to far ['to' should be 'too' in this case]

Can't you see my hand clutching my chest?

^ In my opinion, I feel that this line is a bit too long for this poem. Maybe re-word it? shorten it? say something different? Lol. I just believe that it messes up the flow seeing as how it's a lot longer than the other lines.

Other than that, I really did love this. Specially the whole concept of it.. Talking to your heart.. 'foolish' heart :]

Lovely, dear. 5/5

Keep it up.

Bri [x]

Wow ur poem just is so true to life its not far fetched at all i think we all who has loved can relate to this poems very very good (by the way wat is the the old line kinda bugs me not knowing lol)

Oh, I do admire a beautiful poet's mind.
:claps:

Fifth stanza, typo-
"Why must you take me?
On these journeys I can't comprhend"
*comprehend

Seventh stanza, I believe the last letter is missing...
Don't hurt me!

Thank you for the comment, m'cucumber!

blush x