My Vow

by Ashley Ann   Mar 16, 2007


The greatest promise that Ive made
Is to the one that loves me most
Someone wonderful and so sublime
He's thinking of me all of the time.

I vowed to be chaste
-Until marriage that is..
No matter how strong the temptation
It would only add complications.

Sometimes keeping the promise gets tough
But do I give in?-no, I don't
Because even though I love Thomas
I will never break my promise.

I stick to my word
And I put the Lord first
Sure, Thomas loves me a lot..
As much as God?-I think not.

Jesus Christ died for me
-Very painfully, I might add
So, to show my thanks and admiration
I give my love and obediation.

The greatest promise that Ive ever made
Has not been broken, and will not be
True love waits and so will I
-Waiting until marriage, waiting on high.

Copyright (C) Ashley Paul
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  • 17 years ago

    by Robert

    This was a nice poem the flow was done welland the image you wrote with a great affection to your religion good job Plot121...

  • 17 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    I dont really like this poem, can't really explain, i dont like poems about god and that kind of stuff, but nice try I still voted 5/5 because it just a matter of preference..
    kisses stephanie

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    You believe in god. i love to know that. great poem. the flow was excellent!

    5/5 david

  • 17 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    Great topic-its great to be active in what you believe. The use of some words are wring, such as sublime. In that context it has no meaning. Great flow, simple structure. Keep it up.

    {4/5}

    [PygmyPuff]

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*SugarCube*~

    "Jesus Christ died for me
    -Very painfully, I might add
    So, to show my thanks and admiration
    I give my love and obediation."

    true words^^
    i love it.
    5/5

    ~Chelsea

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