Letting Go

by Carly   Mar 16, 2007


I thought you'd pull me away from the cliff
but you pushed me over the edge
Now there's a war going on inside my heart
as I hold desperatley to the ledge
Should I just fall and save you the trouble
of causing me anymore pain
Because all the lies and shit you've told me
has finally driven me insane
This constant suffering that I've been through
is a nightmare you'll never know
Take one last look at my fallen tears
because I'm about to let go

*Please vote and leave comments, I need to know if I should submitt this poem for a contest I'm in. Thanks a lot!*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    Take one last look at my fallen tears

    i loved this line.. listen what is the way to submit any poem in contest cuz i also want to. anyways

    your poem was gr8 u have talent. take care