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by Independence Forever Mar 17, 2007 category : Dark, fantasy / dark, horror
It follows me on my early path to school an unknown entity, making me feel the fool i run but still it follows my path and never leaves i can't escape it, so sad and silent it grieves when i think I've lost it, i stop and wait but it's still there, i feel like live bait i get to school and the shadow is still following i feel so sad that i keep up my sad wallowing when the sun finally comes up, i see the light the shadow was my own, no horror, but delight but then another shadow appears, we're not done indeed this shadow is my phantasm, the fright has begun
by Twobit
This is good! 5/5
by Vanessa
I liked it, part of the flow seemed a bit forced, but it had an intresting twist at the end. Good job 4/5
by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup
Very well written poem and again i wouldnt change a thing, nessa