Thats sooo good!...and i loved the way you ended it....5/5

xoxSaraa

"but surely you know it amounts to nothing"
"unless i do nothing, it amounts to something"

this is the greatest part of the poem this is a great poem and the end was so perfect,
nessa

I can see a little angel and a devil on either side of my shoulders right now! HAHA

Very nice write my friend! Truly a piece that we all can relate to! It's never worth it to listen to the little evil one! Very nice!!!!

Nice poem, I enjoyed its layout and the Wisdom in the words. As I humble myself and plod along.
Peace and Blessings

It is very interesting, I like the idea of this piece, it has powerful rhythm and topic is very original. You wrote it greatly.

Oiii. Capitalize your I's darling. Sorry, that wasn't a command, just a thought. Lol.

Amazing poem with great meaning. Hopefully it quite resembles you. I think that anyone who looks at their glass half full instead of half empty is quite amazing.

Keep it up. (:
5/5

Wow, Your just amazing at poetry. You are a professional what are you doing on a site like this lol you should be publishing books by now =P Honestly I mena it!! Amazing once again much love from Roxy

Wow. Amazing poem. You are so good at expressing and writing poems! I love it.
5/5

Omg that was so good like leaving negativity behind its very moving

If only some people more could take this path, the world would be so much better, so much more peaceful and so much kinder...