The Big Finale

by TravTagz   Mar 17, 2007


You say you love me but you're "IN" love with him
All these emotions rush and I think of the song "Kim"
So upset and angry that I'm ready to take someones life
But I won't instead I'll take my own with this knife

I never said I was mad that you're now happy
I just ask that you help and forget about me
This will be easier as long as I tell myself no one cares
Take myself away from this world of condescending stares

Lock my door, get ready for the big show
I guess now they will all know
My smiles were nothing more than lies
Inside this boy cries

Never again will I see the light
But no more will I have to fight
This will be the final poem I ever write
I'm going to end my life tonight

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  • 17 years ago

    by Rowena Linley

    Hey great poem keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by ibelievedhim

    I can definitely relate to these feelings. I think about this all the time. This is a really good poem, but I hope you don't go through with it, cuz i love your writing, and I want to see more of it, and you saved my life with that poem, "Leave", cuz now I know I am not alone, which makes me stronger. So, thanks for that, and please don't do it!

    Katie

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    I can relate to these feelings. A breakup is never easy.....but things do get better. Like Liz, I hope ALL in these lines are not true....
    You have a talent in your poetry....writing can help with the pain....Debbie

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    I liked this poem a lot cos I can relate to it in someways. But I hope what you wrote here isn't ALL true..?

    ` Liz

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