A Sip Too Many (Revised Ending)

by Zach-E   Mar 17, 2007


The first time it was such a rush,
From the second it touched my lip,
I felt more alive than I've ever been,
Pure ecstasy upon first sip.

So the next time I take another,
But I don't feel quite the same rush,
So I need to take a bit more,
So life again will seem so lush.

So the cycle continues this way,
Each time a few sips more,
And with it comes dependency,
The magic liquid I'll soon adore.

The mornings after are not so fun,
And life sober looses its appeal,
Soon unable to enjoy just being alive,
Drinking, the only method for me to feel.

The life around me soon degrades,
The need to drink now comes most every day,
With it, natural happiness fades,
And its stench upon me now stays.

Now I don't only drink to be happy,
But to turn upside down my common frowns,
Each day I feel increasingly lonely,
My life lacking ups and plagued with downs.

People tell me to take it easy,
But they don't know my depression,
Or maybe I already told them,
During one of my drunk confessions.

I want these feelings to stop,
But I hate how life feels so numb,
At what point have I sealed my fate,
Forever drinking away my miseries as a bum.

I really don't know any more,
And I'm beginning to lose my cares,
No longer worrying about my friends,
Or the disappointment that fills their glares.

I used to think I could still get help,
To save my life, it's not too late,
But my will is gone and I have conceded,
To drink out my days and accept my fate.

I'm not the man I used to be, now,
Sadness flows down my face in streams,
As I am haunted by distant memories,
Happy times, in what once were happy dreams.

If you think you see me by and by,
Please do not pretend to care,
Because though you knew me earlier,
The man you knew is no longer there.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    This poem just reaches in and tugs at my heart. Having a brother who is an alcoholic, I have watched him walk down the same path you've described and your wording is exact.
    Heart touching write Zach that truly makes one think .....

  • 17 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Zach,

    I've never read a poem that was so realistic as this. YOu have taken the reader down the path of a true alcoholic. It saddens me, as I have seen this happin before. A loved one who used to be full of life... until that first drink. Unfortunetly, It didn't stop with one and eventually drove him to the ultimate sacrifice...his life. You have done a great job of opening up the eyes of those who can't evn begin to understand the road of a true alcoholic. Great job.

    Always,
    Jeannie

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Zach
    This poem really grabbed my heart. Seeing someone I care for go through this. It is so heart breaking to watch. I have never seen it put so realistic before. You have done an amazing job on this poem.

    People tell me to take it easy,
    But they don't know my depression,
    Or maybe I already told them,
    During one of my drunk confessions.

    I had a hard time picking just one stanza they were all great.
    Take Care Cindy