Towers

by Kelsea   Mar 17, 2007


Its the rush and release
With cold acts of desperation
They lock you in a den
So that its death by isolation-
At least until you're back again

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wow I loved the emotion that you gave off in this poem. The feeling was amazing, you felt so much with so little words. The ending I think needs a bit of work, I felt that it just sort of stopped and needs to continue on a bit longer, but other than that it was great. Nice write.

  • 17 years ago

    by azii

    Short, but nice! :)

    I agree with BloodScars, It would be much better if you would continue it a little bit more..

    Anyway, the idea was great!

    Good job; 4.5/5
    Keep it up!
    && Take care!

  • 17 years ago

    by BloodScars

    Its short...it has more emotion the the first one, but if there was more too it it wold be 100 times better
    4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    I liked this one, short but, interesting. Nice write! 5/5

    marcella

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