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by FranFran Mar 17, 2007 category : Love, romance / secret love
I thought it'd finally be my turn. I thought it would finally be my time. I thought just for one second I could finally call you mine. You told me we were best friends. and i meant the world to you I just smiled bashfully and said that I loved you too. you just looked at me all funny and you didn't know what to say. I told you it's alright I've always felt the same way. but then you apologized and said that's not what you meant. and then my face started to burn.My secret I should've kept. "Oh My god I'm so stupid is what I said before I ran out this place. Right now I want to be alone I just need my own space. I go to an old building where I usually go to figure things out. I guess it wasn't that bad there's really nothing to cry about. but all I can remember is the way you looked at me. you were everything I've always wanted you were perfect to the T Now I'm standing on the rooftop. as the things you said are still in my head. You said we were better off friends....well I guess I'm better off dead.
by Startle Me
It's a very nice, well written poetry. Only one tip, though. Try not to use pronouns as much. It ruins the flow of the whole poem. But all in all, very good poetry.