Comments : Unforgiven

  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    This is a good poem another interesting topic, keep at it,
    nessa

  • 17 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    I say, that was one of your best david, I really liked the emotion and pain, I almost cried. (We're all trapped dogs)

    -Liz-
    5/5