You Have My Heart

by Brittney Follett   Mar 17, 2007


I'm trying to walk when you make me crawl.
Drooling over the phone, waiting for your call.
When you kiss me, my heart flies above.
When you're with me I know true love.

You are everything I could ever crave.
You are with me. Wow, you must be brave.
I love everything that you ever do.
You better know that: I love you.

I love chocolate... But I love you more.
That's a lot, before you two were war.
I couldn't choose which one I love best.
Now I love you and...you know the rest.

Being so near you, I just feel so strong.
Not being with you, it just feels so wrong.
I'm trying to speak with nothing to say.
I try to breathe when you take it away.

Bad enough you have cooties and I love you.
But I wrote a corny poem about it too.
You make me laugh, you make me smile.
I guess after that... I can keep you for a while.

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  • 16 years ago

    by brittany19

    Soo cute :)

  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    Haha. Wow, aww! That was so adorable! What a lovely dedication to your man!

    The cooties part made me laugh!

    I love chocolate... But I love you more.
    ^ Haha. That's just priceless!

    Now I love you and...you know the rest.
    ^ I loved that line. You let the reader basically interpret their own meaning. And conclusion.

    Wonderful write!

  • 17 years ago

    by Hey Brittknee

    Awww this is soo cute, i love this poem & good luck with your boyfriend hunny

    love brittany (MD)

  • 17 years ago

    by Victoria Rainey

    You can cvhange your poem either way.. it sounds really good I love it and the rhymes too.. Good job again! well done 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Cute & Adorable.
    Your word usage was amazing & left vivid descriptions in my mind. The flow was flawless & can't get any better.

    "I love chocolate... But I love you more.
    That's a lot, before you two were war.
    I couldn't choose which one I love best.
    Now I love you and...you know the rest."

    ^ My favorite stanza. "I love chocolate... But I love you more" - that is such a true statement for me. Lol. Wonderful job, keep it up! 5/5

    Stephanie Lynn .+.

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