So beautiful.. Love it. The rhyming has been done very well. 5/5
Keep up the great work!
Best of wishes & take care

This totally reflects on ppl that can't tell the one they lovebut i think ths is my fav

I can relate here! I mean we're working out thank goodness he he but I am able to relate to this from before I was with her. I loved the rhyming it was done very well I think and the emotions are just flooding out. Keep it up.