Well, this one I believe was the best out of the three I read today. It had all the criteria I ask for in a poem. A very lovely job, keep it up.

Happy Days,
Jennifer.

This one was ok. There wasn't a lot of flow in it and it was hard for me to stay focused on this poem. 4/5

<UnToLd TrUtH>

Nicely done,
you have done a great job and i really like the vocab choices here, keep up the great work like always. 5/5 from me.

The word usage was excellent. It allowed the poem to flow so smoothly.
Excellent rhyming as well
Well done
5/5
*Gem*

I really like this poem a lot, the meaning is very deep. Funny how the words of the ones we love can stay with us for so long. amazing job 5/5

Awww this is sad I love how the emphasis is on that one single bottle of spilled perfume! nice job!

"Broken glasses and spilled perfume"
That line really captures an image, I suggest writing more poems with imagery because you have a real talent for it. Keep on the excellent work! 5/5

~jas~

I LOVE this one! it is absolutely amazing! the flow is great and the wording is amazing! 5/5

Awww. This is sad I liked it though hun. You did a great job with it. Lovely. :]

This poems really great i loved it alot. The emotion was good and i really did like this line
"Broken glasses and spilled perfume"
It caught my attention. Well done this poem was portrayed really well. Good work~mel

I loved this, i hope you win the contest,
i loved this part:
Again and again, like a broken record

isn't it so true though...sometimes you don't realize that they're not coming back and the realization hits you hard

beautiful job

brittany (MD)