Nice job on this poem. Very passionate.

For one night you are mine
I wish sun will never rise
Everything is fine
Tonight you are mine

I really loved this stanza.
Take Care Cindy

Nice poem full of feelings......5/5

GOD bless u

So good feeling and i sometimes just don't like explicit poems cos they go too much hardcore but it's really alright
Keep it up
LAURA

A very passionate poem.
Nice job.

This is really romantic poem. I can feel so much passion on it and it is inspiring.. Reveals something and same time leave space for imagination for readers. ;)

It's sexy, it's romantic... it's actually a very amaizing poem. one of my favoorites. good job. 5/5

What a beautiful poem, so well written. I think you could have got away with not putting it in under explicit though, it might get more votes. Very good loved it

It was a poem i will never forget good work

Excellent poem! I could feel your emotions running through the poem.. I could feel the passion and the longing for this person! Keep up the good work!