I think i know what you are talking abt there....Its really sad so much voilence happening around in our country...Problems everywhere...I think u have written this one pretty good...take care and keep smiling always...

Nice job on this poem.

Sun sets,humanity mourns.
The evils has once again won.

Loved your ending.
Take Care Cindy

It's true at how many wrong convictions there are and how the evil in people can win..
Excellent descriptions in such short sentences.
Well done
5/5
*Gem*

Damn, this was like a thriller movie or some novel....too dark but the reality of todays world picturaized in some fashion...great words indeed

all the best and take care

Sad to think this sort of thing is going on.....well written in a few short lines.....to the point....

Short, sweet, and most likley - unfortunately - true.

Very nice poem keep writng