I really like this one has a mysteriousness to it i think.
well done
xx

I really like this one too.... i love reading your poems, and yours are the best ive read all day!...great 5/5

I really like this poem! your a great writer!
-gods goth!

Wow, very beautiful....love what you write
hope i can here more.

There is a lot of emotion filling each line, great job