Well, you obviously have some talent!! i like both of your poems!! you express your feelings very well!! (god what i just said sounds Korney sorry!!)

I think you did a very good job on this. I use to have these problems with some of my friends. Not so much anymore. This is a well-written piece and you did a good job of just getting your point across.

=]

Jackie Marie

Awww thats so sad Stevie!!! :'( but Marsha is right, u def have a way with words!!

THis poem had so much passion and emotion, that I got swept away in your writing. I really liked evrything about the poem, and when I think about life, what you wrote is true in such cases. Great job!

This is amazing.
like honestly.
im jealous.
hahaha. this is really good.
keep it up.
5./5
<3jess