Comments : The Orphan

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Awww..this made me cry this is really sad and i cant believe that there are only 5 visits this poem is excellent!! but in my oppion just make it a little longer....keep on writing

    ~*Jazzy~*

  • 17 years ago

    by silvershoes

    This is sort of odd. She is abondoned by her family for speaking? Sounds a bit extreme. Either way, good choice of topic. More poems should be written about orphans.